Douglas Bruton is a guidance-teacher in an Edinburgh High School. He's also a very gifted writer; and he has been accused of multiple counts of plagiarism. Is he guilty? Read on, and make up your own mind.
Early in 2009, Bruton won a prize from the now-closed literary magazine, Cadenza. It was edited at the time by Vanessa Gebbie, who is herself a prize-winning writer. Bruton's prize-winning story was called Waiting in the Scriptorium and when it appeared in print, several Cadenza readers complained that it bore striking similarities to Paul Auster's novel, Travels in the Scriptorium. Vanessa Gebbie had not read Auster's novel so was not in a position to judge: but she knew Bruton, and she asked him what had happened. He denied having ever read the Auster novel, insisted it was nothing but coincidence, and the matter was dropped. It's not surprising that her attention was elsewhere: Cadenza's subscriptions were down, and Gebbie was fighting to keep it going. Cadenza closed for business soon after.
Unless you've read the Auster novel it's difficult to tell if Bruton plagiarised it; but I'm told that if you read the book's précis on Amazon you'll see marked similarities between the two. When Paul Auster's agent read Douglas Bruton's story she was sufficiently alarmed by it to request that she be notified if it was ever published again. With Cadenza closed, there was little else she could do.
Had this been the only allegation of plagiarism made against Douglas Bruton it's likely that all would have been forgotten. But a few months later a new story surfaced, and this one kicked off a real fuss.
For some time, Douglas Bruton was a member of Vanessa Gebbie's Fiction Workhouse (yes, that same Gebbie who edited Cadenza, and who had taken Bruton to task over the allegations about his Scriptorium story). The Fiction Workhouse was an online community based on developing talent and encouraging writing.
It was common at The Fiction Workhouse for members to share news of their successes and when member Tania Hershman won a prize in 2006 with her story My Name Is Henry, she duly reported her win. Her story was much discussed by all members, including Douglas Bruton. However, when Douglas Bruton won a prize for a story called Mondays Smell Of Burnt Toast late in 2008, he didn't mention it at all at the Workhouse. One of the Workhouse's other members found it by chance, realised it seemed familiar, did a bit of searching, and discovered Tania's story: Bruton's story was so very similar to Hershman's that the person who read the two side-by-side decided it had to be plagiarism. Despite this, Douglas Bruton denied all accusations.
Despite his repeated denials, much pressure was put on Douglas Bruton to do the right thing. Eventually he contacted the writers' site which had given him his prize, asked them to take his story down, and refunded his prize money. But Douglas Bruton still denies that he copied any aspect of Tania's story at all and that all he's done is to "build" on it. But there's a difference between "building" and plagiarising from two sources instead of one.
The only part of Bruton's story which doesn't also appear in Hershman's story is the issue of synesthesia. Douglas Bruton comments reguarly on Nicola Morgan's blog: Morgan is a UK author who has written a book called Mondays Are Red, which features someone with a very specific and unusual form of synesthesia. Which is exactly the same form of synesthesia which features in Bruton's story (which has, you'll notice, a very similar title to Morgan's book). Did he plagiarise her too? I don't know. I've not read her book. But it appears that Douglas Bruton has read it, as he's praised it on Morgan's blog.
Since then it's come to light that before any of this happened, Douglas Bruton was asked to leave a writers' group (in the real world, not online) because of his habit of taking the work of his fellow group-members and rewriting it in his own words, and then presenting it in subsequent meetings as entirely his own.
Douglas Bruton has repeatedly insisted that he has not plagiarised anyone. He's published long passages on his own blog in which he discusses the issues of creativity, ownership and plagiarism. But with his stories not readily available for people to read, it's impossible for anyone not directly involved to make up their own mind.
It's about time that changed.
Here is a link to Paul Auster's Travels In The Scriptorium on Amazon, where you can read the reviews; and here is Douglas Bruton's Waiting In The Scriptorium for you to read in all its glory.
Here is a link to Tania Hershman's prizewinning story, here is a link to Nicola Morgan's Mondays Are Red, and here is Douglas Bruton's Mondays Smell Of Burnt Toast for you to read and compare.
It's true that ideas cannot be copyrighted, only the expression of those ideas: it's therefore sometimes assumed that if you re-write someone else's story you're not guilty of plagiarism. This is not so. Precise plot-points, characterisation, structure and so on are all part of the expression of ideas and if someone copies those parts of your work, then they're guilty of plagiarism. No matter what they might insist.
Edited to add: Vanessa Gebbie has pointed out that this post contains several errors. I apologise for those, and will add her comments below this so that the record is put straight. But the central issue about Douglas Bruton and plagiarism remains unchanged.
Corrections from Vanessa Gebbie:
Zoe King was editor of Cadenza. I was her deputy.
Bruton’s story Waiting in the Scriptorium did not win a prize. It was commended.
The Fiction Workhouse was not founded until February 2007. Ms Hershman’s story had already won a prize and been published in 2006. It was linked openly from her website.
Bruton did not join FW until early 2008.
Wednesday, 20 January 2010
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Dear Doug Cheadle (if that is indeed your name, which I think it might not be!)
ReplyDeleteI am not sure, but I think posting my work like this on your site might just be a flagrant breach of my copyright of those written word. But as so much of what you say is designed to influence the reader and so much is wrong, it does not surprise me that you have no regard for what is right.
I was never asked if I had read or not read the Paul Auster novel. To say this is to make me sound sneaky. I have blogged on my own site about the clever thing I was doing with Auster's ideas... something a little different from what Auster was doing. A Scriptorium is a place in a monastery where manuscripts are copied... but the monks were not photocopiers, they put something of themselves into the copy they made... that is part of the point here... too clever for some people to get perhaps. But I even put Paul Auster in the story.. he takes my character to the edge of the room (story) and back again... the point was again perhaps too smart.
I did not discuss Tania's story on Fiction Workhouse. That was well before my time there. I did, however, post my story 'Mondays
Smell of Burnt Toast' on the Fiction Workhouse site for feedback before it won any prize. If I had thought it was wrong would I have done that? I have been completely open about my writing. Precisely because I do not think what I was doing was wrong.
I had read Tania's story. I read Nicola Morgan's book too... because I was fascinated by the subject of synaesthesia. I have read other books on the subject, too, including other pieces of fiction. My son knew I was interested and when he discovered that Lightning can sometimes cause synaesthesia, my story was born. I did not go away and read Tania's story or Nicola Morgan. I wrote the piece straight. But I was aware that the structure was borrowed. (When, after publication, the link between the title and Nicola Morgan's book was pointed out to me, it was so clear that I was surprised that I did not see it before... that's how creativity can work... so I stand by the title as mine.)
I have blogged about all of this and have not hidden anything at all. Look at the differences to see that my story is not Tania's although it clearly owes a debt there.
Another error, and I have addressed this too on my blog, is that I was never asked to leave a writers' group. Indeed, the opposite is the case: when I said I would leave, I was asked to reconsider and stay. Once again you seek to blacken my character and so I expect opinion to be swayed against me here.
I have blogged about this on my site and I have revealed the borrowings of Vanessa Gebbie, who has been a chief accuser in this matter. With her story 'The Collector' which she admits took its inspiration from a Raymond Carver story called 'The Collectors'. I do not accuse her of plagiarism because i do not think what she has done is plagiarism; but I do think what she has done is no different from what I have done.
I do not expect to be vindicated by your publishing of my stories. Your introduction makes sure of that, But if you want some sense on the matter, you can read my side on my blog.
And as a postscript... the woman I referred to as that 'mad woman' in a recent blog post of mine, was intended to mean that 'irate woman'... that others reading what i said took it to mean she was mentally unbalanced is perhaps more to do with what she has said and done. However, I have had several mutual acquaintances admit to me privately that they think her not stable and frighteningly powerful in the world of writing.
Douglas, you say you were doing clever things with Auster’s ideas which were perhaps too clever for some people to understand: but I’m reasonably intelligent and I’m educated past degree level (English lit, just in case you wondered), and even when I read your story with this in mind, all I see is that you took Auster’s very clever novel and rewrote a part of it in your own words while retaining all of Auster’s own plot points and characterisations. I couldn’t see that you added anything to his work apart from your own name.
ReplyDeleteYou might not think that you’ve done anything wrong but take it from me: you have. This is plagiarism. You’ve not taken an element from the stories concerned and developed them into something of your own: you’ve used the whole things (or in Auster’s case, about a third of his novel) and have just given them a quick rewrite. You’d do yourself a huge favour if you’d take on board right now that this is plagiarism and you’re in the wrong, and stop protesting your innocence.
When you say that I once again try to blacken your character: when did I do that before? I’m not trying to blacken anyone’s character, I was just recounting the facts as I understood them. I’ve since corrected them, as Vanessa Gebbie pointed out my errors. You’ve now posted your version of the truth but as your version of the truth also allows you to believe that you haven’t plagiarised anyone, I’m not sure anyone’s going to believe you.
I have read your blog and I was appalled. You’ve posted some really nasty stuff there, and I think you should be ashamed of yourself. As I understand it, Vanessa, Jane and Nik were once your friends and have all tried to help you. That you could write such spiteful things about them shows a lot about your true nature, I think. And no, that explanation about “mad” vs “irate” doesn’t hold water. You’re the one who is looking mentally unbalanced here, not your friend. It’s easy to say that people have admitted to you in private that they agree with you: it’s a classic internet-troll defence. Thing is, you don’t exactly have many people jumping to your defence, do you? Apart from William Shears, and there’s a great big question-mark hanging over his head right now.
And, Doug Cheadle, (miss or mr?) there aren't too many jumping in here to call me thief either.
ReplyDeleteI have been portrayed as a monstererous sneak through all of this... for more than six months. I have seen people who I thought were friends tell lies about me and tell them publicly. They have, they say, ruined my chances of publication in the market I work in by telling editors and competition judges that I am a thief. And you think it is I who have been nasty. I think under the circumstances I have been pretty reserved in my response.
I have not simply rewritten either Auster of Hershman. With Auster I have added elements and dwelt on the 'copying' and inventing ideas of a what a scritptorium is. It may be chalked up as a failed experiment. But I do not see many people coming here to call me thief.
As for William Shears, it remains to be seen who he is - just as it remains to be seen who you are. I think people would have reason to be more suspicious of you than this Shears person and more suspicious of your motives, too.
More than 310 views on this site and it falls to you once again to make the charge of plagiarism. That should tell you something.
Maybe I do come across as mentally unbalanced in my fierce fight to defend my character and my work. I do not think that if you were charged in this way that you would fight any the less fiercely.
I have not betrayed those who have supported me privately because people like you and Jane and Vanessa could then turn against them... look at how effective you have been in 'blackballing' me!!! And it has in fact happen with one of these already. But I repeat here, that I do not know who this William Shears might be, but that he thinks there is no plagiarism here with Hershman's story and mine says something to me and to anyone who would care to examine the pieces.
And just for the record, Doug Cheadle, your character here must be called into question, as must your motives in all of this. You have stolen my stories to hang them up here and legally speaking that is copyright infringement... that is real... ask Jane, she blogs about copyright theft on her blog.
ReplyDeleteAnd the fact that we don't know who you are is also a source of suspicion and adds to the feeling that this is a conspiracy that is going on. Ay least William Shears has had the courage to come out and identify himself.
Just maybe, Doug Cheadle, you are not as right as you think you are. They certainly aren't queuing up here to support your contention that I am a thief.
Douglas, if you think that my use of your stories here is copyright infringement then you have to agree that your use of Tania's and Auster's stories were also copyright infringement. You can't have it both ways, unless you are so far in denial that you're emerging out the other end.
ReplyDeleteI've identified myself just as much as William Shears has. He's provided no real identification: no links to who he is in real life, or to any other blog activity: all he's done is fill in a few details on Blogger's profile page, which means nothing at all. He's a dealer, is he? A dealer in what? Heroin? Fluffy kittens? Cards?
And while people aren't queuing up to support me, at least one person whose identity we can verify has supported me. Which is more than you can say. Give my love to William when you next slip on his shoes.
Since my name and my book, Mondays are Red, have been mentioned and I therefore might be expected to have a view, I would like to make the point that the fact that people have not leapt to the defence of one side or another is not necessarily a sign that they don't have a view, or that they don't care, but that sometimes silence is the wisest response, at least from those of us who don't fully know what's going on and haven't managed to unravel it. I have no desire, nor time, to unravel it. All I know with certainty is that it's a very unpleasant saga.
ReplyDeleteIs it perhaps time to stop? There are some aggrieved parties, and it can be hard to walk away when you're hurt, but nothing good is going to come of this by anyone saying anything more. What's the utilitarian solution with the greatest good for the greatest number? Silence. It's all been said, points made etc etc. And for those who feel that their points have not been accepted, I don't think that's going to change. Time to walk away.
Doug, for the last week or so I've been receiving copies of all comments left on this blog before they've been approved.
ReplyDeleteI assume you've set up your Blogger account to forward them all onto me.
While it's diverting, I'm not quite sure why you've done this and would appreciate it if you'd let me know.
Douglas/William, a reminder of what I wrote in this thread:
ReplyDeleteI warn you now: I'm not going to approve many more of your lengthy, ranting comments here. You're not moving on, you're not adding anything to the discussion. All you're doing is bleating about how you've been wronged, and how everyone is being a big fat meanie to you, and how no one is clever enough to understand you or your brilliant writing. You've made your points, now don't make them again. If you have anything new to say then say it, otherwise keep quiet.
You've left three more comments on this thread since I wrote that, but my stance hasn't changed. Don't expect it to.
Jane, I sent you an email explaining why I'd done that. Sorry if you haven't received it.
ReplyDeleteBearing in mind that in my opinion several of Douglas/William's comments have been either libellous or harassing towards you, I thought you needed to be appraised of what he was saying about you just in case he stepped even further across the line. I'll leave your name on the notification list if you don't mind, because while I'm not going to approve any more of his comments unless he moves on, that doesn't mean he won't make them.
Nicola, your comment is probably the wisest I've had here. I'm not going to comment any further unless anyone else does: but I would like to say that Douglas is doing himself no favours at all by making blog posts like this one, and this one, especially when he denies the people concerned the right to reply by refusing to approve their responses. He needs to step back and wonder why he's been the focus of so much anger and consider what his own role has been in all of this.
ReplyDeleteAlso as no-one has caught on to origin of William Shears, there is a clue on Douglas's blog, where he posted a quote from All You Need is Love, by The Beatles. Billy Shears, the fictional character in the Sgt Pepper's album.
ReplyDeleteObvious when you think about it. Even that is borrowed.
I shake my head in sorrow. In her wise comment, Nicola Morgan has said exactly how I feel. I had refrained from commenting before because Mr Bruton would immediately accuse me of being one of Jane Smith's cronies and out to 'get' him.
ReplyDeleteHowever, it's time I stated publicly and categorically that Jane may be many things--nobody's perfect--but she is not a liar. She has not set out to destroy Mr Bruton. Why would she bother? It would seem, however, that he's doing a brilliant job of it all on his own--and with a little help from his friend.
I have followed this matter closely right from the beginning and whilst I don't know all that has been said and done, I have read some of the stories in question. I believe I am a reasonably intelligent woman and am not easily led or fooled. I make up my own mind.
I have two helpful suggestions for Mr Bruton.
Firstly, that he stops ranting and listens to himself.
Secondly, that he adheres to the age-old saying: When you find yourself in a hole, stop digging.
Sally, I will not be hounding you on your blog. You ARE one of Jane's friends, but I do not hold that against you.
ReplyDeleteJane HAS lied. I am sorry she has. And as a friend of hers I know that will be hard to accept. She HAS lied. About William Shears being me or my alter ego. She went on about IP addresses and fooled even me. But William Shears has done some research and shown that Jane Smith lies (I knew she had because I know I am not William!)... but to have it proved beyond doubt now makes it visible to everyone. She does lie. And then when you get that you can see that she does it out of malice... there can be no other reason.
And as to who this Doug Cheadle is, surely it is obvious that the intent of this site was to harm me... not to foster friendly debate of the issues, not to help me and other writers... but just to do me harm.
I am also an intelligent person, Sally. And as such I allow people to differ in their views. At the very least (whatever your view) the case of my stories here is not an OBVIOUS one of plagiarism. That being the case, why all this harm against me? It doesn't take an intelligent person to work it out.
I assume when Sally says "with a little help from his friend", she means me.
ReplyDeleteDouglas and I have never posted or blogged from the same IP address. When Jane said we did, I asked her on more than one occasion, to check her findings, because I knew for a fact that this was an impossibility, and she was wrong.
Jane's response:
"Douglas and William: you insist you're two separate people and yet you both post from the same IP address, you both refer to SiteMeter as "Sitemaster" and you both suggest I "go back and check my machine" when referring to my findings."
She was given ample opportunity from me, (and it would seem Douglas too), to admit she had made a "mistake", but she chose to maintain a lie.
She has also linked me with someone called Amber, who like me also apparently posts comments from Brentwood, and you Doug Cheadle, have linked me to someone in Brentwood called Barry, (who I think you referred to as Brian).
I state here and now, and I'm not a liar, neither anonymous Barry or Amber, have anything to do with me, I have never posted anything anonymously with-in this community. So for Barry and Amber to both be associated, along with myself, with Brentwood, is either one hell of a coincidence, or another damn lie.
Sally, your right, Jane had no reason to lie about me, I have claimed right from the start that I am not a writer, she could have so easily dismissed me as someone who doesn't know what he's talking about. Instead she chose to lie, and use me to further discredit Douglas. Why? I don't know, only Jane can answer that.
Douglas and William: I'll tell you this one last time. Jane checked her Sitemeter statistics and discovered from them that you were both posting here from the same computer. I then installed Sitemeter here, tracked your comments, and found exactly the same thing. You continue to insist we both lied about it but the information was there, open to anyone who cared to take a look. With that, and the strong similarities to your writing styles, you're making yourself look more and more foolish each time you make these comments. Oh, and William: your post which you claim exposes Jane as a liar does no such thing. Instead it shows that you have no idea how IP addresses work or what can be proved with them. It does show that you know roughly how long it takes to drive from Edinbugh to Essex, but that's about all.
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